Thousand feelings with you and without you
But words aren't enough to convey
Do you feel the same way as I do?
I move into a world that I never knew
With music in my head, my heart sways
Thousand feelings with you and without you
What can I do, what can I say to you?
When I go blank with you on the way
Do you feel the same way as I do?
And I only hope you feel the same too
Just when I think I've words, they stray
Thousand feelings with you and without you
Feelings so many yet words so few
What have you done to chase them away?
Do you feel the same way as I do?
I love you, yes I do -
One thing that I know for sure today
Thousand feelings with you and without you
Do you feel the same way as I do?
A Villanelle is a nineteen-line poem consisting of rhyming scheme: aba aba aba aba aba abaa. The first and the third lines in the first stanza are repeated in alternating order throughout the poem, and appear together in the last couplet.
A beautiful expression!
ReplyDeleteNice poem. I am proud of u
ReplyDeleteSounds like a wonderful love. I do hope the other feels the same as well.
ReplyDeleteall the words are full of happiness...nice one :)
ReplyDeleteWell done!
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All you need to do is give him that dazzling smile, and he will fall under your spell completely. Smiles.......it is always so tenuous, the time of beginnings......I will be watching your poems, to follow the love story!
ReplyDeleteSweet feelings here - your heart shines... With Best Wishes Scott www.scotthastie.com
ReplyDeleteA beautiful poem Ankita and this poetic form sounds quite intriguing ! I should try it out sometime... :-)
ReplyDeleteP.S. You're looking beautiful in the picture ( left side ) ..
Beautifully done… not an easy form to fill.
ReplyDeletebeautiful!! excellently composed!!
ReplyDeleteWonderful. I felt like I was reading a secret.
ReplyDeleteInteresting poetry form with delightful sentiments. I had rather hoped he(?) would have shown his love too!
ReplyDeleteGreat use of the form to convey meaning in your poem. I particularly like the repetition of the question and hope he does.
ReplyDeleteNice poem. I like the way explain the style of poetry at the end.
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